The Temple House Vanishing

By Rachel Donohue

Group Comments:

No sense of time or place.

So obvious what happened from the very beginning.

Very cardboard characters.

So flat.

Teenage angsty romance. No one had any personality. Depressing.

No acknowledgement of mental health issues.

Not a mystery.

Too long.

Awful. A slog. Gave up.

No plot.

All smoke and mirrors to hide the fact that there was no mystery.

Two 1st person narrators was hard to follow.

Listening to it was terrible.

Hated the perspective and time shifts.

Mystery part was totally unrealistic.

Liked the last chapters.